introduction
Black berry addiction
Why are teenagers addicted to Blackberry ?
Nowadays many people have Blackberriese especially teenagers . They became very addicted . Addiction means that you have to do something all the time,for example teenagers spend all their time on Blackberriese mms and sometimes they don’t sleep or study.It’s like their brains have stopped.This essay will discuss two effects of this problem and give two solutions.
The problem of BlackBerry is caused by free time and has two effects. Free time makes teenagers addicted to BlackBerry because they don’t know what to do on their free time, For example they ignore everything and focus on the BlackBerry only. The second effect is failing at school. BlackBerry addiction makes teenagers failing at school because they spent so much time on the BlackBerry and they doesn’t study well.
There are two common useful solutions for BlackBerry addiction. The first solution is to do their hopes or some fun activity to forget about BlackBerry , for example they can go camping with their friends or with their family so they can forget about their Blackberries. Another solution is to focus on their studies because if they work hard on their studies they will spent less time on their Blackberries, For example they can make group studies so they can forget about their Blackberries.
conclusion
This essay had discussed two causes of a problem BlackBerry addiction and given two solutions.the causes of BlackBerry addiction are free time and failing at school and the solutions are to do their hopes or some fun activity and focus on their study.In my opinion teenagers should not have BlackBerriese because it’s bad for them and to take care of their studies.
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Good structure to this introduction, with some language errors.
ReplyDelete1) Blackberry is a single word
2) Is there only 1 Blackberry in the world?
3) berriese - SP
4) berriese especially teenagers P
5) no space between full stop and the word before it
6) no space between comma and the word before it
7) Addiction means ... sleep or study. This should be 2 sentences